Tuesday, February 22, 2011
My holiday
Outside alone, no key, left in need of a shower, fresh clothes, and something to eat. Who would do that ohh yea-my nanna.
I was furious standing there with nothing but boxes and a t shirt feeling so disgusted I waited outside. as I watched the clock from a small gap in the window drapes. C’mon! c’mon!!!! I repeated angrily in my head. Thinking about a nice cold shower, fresh clean clothes. At one point I was tempted to break the window but that wouldn’t have ended in a happy result I don’t want to go into to much detail about that.
Oh the joy I felt in my heart when I heard the sound of my nanna’s car pulling up on the drive way. I thought to my self could it be I felt like it was Christmas my birthday and Easter all in one. to be in that shower to have clean clothes on was my highlight of my holiday.
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What a fantastic piece of writing Kalim. I felt like I was there as I read it. The way you phrased this really hooked me in. I look forward to seeing you writing take off during the year.
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Ps. I would love to know what happened next. I hope this is just the first instalment!
Great writing Kalim not too sure if your Nana Tofa will love it thou lol. Were did Nana go ??? and where had you just come back from ?.
ReplyDeleteVery expressive writing keep up the good work Kalim :)
thank you Mrs Burt and Mum. She went to work and Left me with paea and his family they were inside. I love it the comments Mum I feel a reward coming on.
ReplyDeleteWith the front house people Kalim LOL . Im looking forward to reading more of your stories this year.
ReplyDeleteKalim,
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a very interesting story. I especially like it due to it being straight from your heart. This story is something that happened to you which makes it very special. From the very beginning of your story it just made me want to keep reading, so I could see what happened next. It seems like you had a very interesting holiday!